What would you think of this family for a crime story?

Francisco Philippian-the Patriarch, Crime Boss and Wealthy Lord with a Manor, an estate with orchards and vineyards, a hunting ground and small pastures. He is a land-grabber, an antique-dealer and a well-known merchant of the Black Market. He practices Catholicism but holds Antinomian beliefs; he is whorish, amoral, proud, ruthless and raging mad.



Marion Philippian-the cousin/wife of Francisco; a fat, bawdy woman with black-dyed hair, powdered face, big white bosoms and ruddy cheeks. She shares all her passions with her husband, other men and women. She is truly obstinate, greedy, ambitious, charismatic, quarrelsome yet mild, and gluttonous. She once owned six brothels. Unlike her husband, she is a Pagan Occultist.



Fabian-the eldest son, a young man with black hair, brown eyes, a solid physique, a chiseled chest and broad shoulders. He鈥檚 skilled in the art of wrestling, boxing, fist-fighting, hunting, drinking and boasting. A real braggart with narcissistic overtones and proud pleasures in revelry and gambling.



Melinda-the second eldest and the eldest daughter, pale-skinned with blue eyes, black hair and curvy hips. Melinda is a talented dancer, actress and gold-digger; having been married three times to wealthy older men who die without knowing her true nature as a greedy, self-interested, flirtatious Machiavellian.



Seraphine-the third eldest daughter, fair-skinned, green-eyed, skinny necked, eagle-nosed, slim and tall flaming redhead with a mole on her neck. She is sadistic and a lesbian; from reading poetry of Sappho, to beating up prostitutes, to stealing from old women, spinsters and widows. Albeit a sweet and charming manner, she maintains a self-centered and spiteful nature.



Julian-the fourth child and second son; a tall man with blond hair tied in a ponytail, amber eyes, smooth chest, athletic build and long legs. A talented bisexual poet, swordsman, gentleman, violinist, thief and rapist. A smug artist with arrogant assumptions, vainglorious appetites and a manipulative mind.



Rosette-the fifth daughter, a slender young lady with brown hair, blemishes, gray eyes, long legs and skinny fingers. She鈥檚 a dabbler in astrology, aphrodisiacs and palm-reading in a self-absorbed way. She is both selfish and stubborn. She uses animal parts for potions or incantations, strongly believes in spirits/fate, strongly dislikes science/modern medicine and smokes opium.



Edna-the sixth daughter; a short, petite, blond-haired, blue-eyed trollop with clear cheeks, glossy skin, full-bosoms and dainty toes. She鈥檚 seductive, loose, spoiled, vain, fussy and choosy. She has the tendency to be whiny, throws tantrums and has an obsessive competitive streak.



Tristan-the seventh and youngest son, a young lad with light-brown hair, green eyes, a smooth chest and dimples. He is a painter, a voyeur, a poacher and a drinker. He is also completely unambitious, annoying, autoerotic and stubborn.What would you think of this family for a crime story?
Just by the sound of it i would definitely buy that book if you do end up finishing and publishing it. All the characters so dynamic and versatile. Although, wouldn't it be strange that the WHOLE family is involved with criminal activities? Well, its your story. You can put different twist and side stories to show the true emotions, feelings, and virtues of each character as the plot unfolds.
You've created a masterful list of characters. I can only imagine the interactions because your details about the characters is fantastic. I read every word and would have kept reading.



Yes, it sounds like a big hit.

~What would you think of this family for a crime story?
That is really good! It really would draw in a reader if you were describing a person I would most definitely read this 1000/1000! Perfect!
U have alot of time i'n ur hands,but interesting story,i rate it a 10What would you think of this family for a crime story?
Sounds Really Good I Didnt Read It All But Dang I Wana Read That Story ,